Nice work Aries Rising!

Loved the ending it speaks to me and says "live whilst you still can"

Thanks

Was just a little random one that popped in my head

Craig, a inspiring write. We all need to live a little. We get caught up in the day to day and all the stuff that bogs us down. Although I have NO singing voice I still sing along, in my head I am a-m-a-z-I-n-g....lol. Well done-

Craig....as im sure your aware i am a fan of your writing, you are incredibly diverse in the subjects you write about which is freakin awesome ( and something I myself need to work on) and like most of us, your writes vary in length...with this one....it is short but has a very powerful msg within on that firstly alot of people can relate to and secondly one that can actually show people and make them think and maybe change something about their life they don't like.

As B said this is a very inspiring write and I think Is my favorite of yours to date (added straight to my favs) your meter and rhymes are spot on and you totally hit the nail on the head. killed it!

Ben

Love this!!! It reminds us that while we get older we can still do the things that we used to love. We should not let life get in the way of doing what we love.

Pleased you like although I'm amazed you found it as it's buried way back lol

Regards

Craig

Tbis is fab!