Comments : One More Day

  • 7 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    A warm welcome to the site, Jared.

    I often wonder what I would do if I had one more day with those I loved or just one more day in general. It's horrible to acknowledge, but something tells me I just may live more in that solitary day than I might in a lifetime. Anyway, the lesson is to take nothing for granted - especially those dear to us.
    Great early post from you.
    All the best,

    Ben

    • 7 years ago

      by Jared Douglas

      Unfortunately that was the last day I had with her. I never even got to give her the poem. She left me for someone else the next day.

  • 7 years ago

    by Fredy RoMa0u Sanchez

    Great poem, really brings out the emotions