by CJ Maleney Mar 29, 2017
category :
Life, society /
faith, religion
Pick up your soldiers. |
by Naughtymouse
not the most informative of comments ill admit but i freakin love your writing craig there are times when your metaphors are so good that i question myself if i'm getting it right, the crazy thing about it is that even if i don't and take the words at face value and not metaphors the poem is still epic. |
by CJ Maleney
Drunken swing ball, love that comment lol |
Well thought out, great work |
by Liz
This speaks volumes. At first I was reminded of myself with old toys. I saw this in a literal sense. Then the last two verses, I was like, "well then...". Definitely something that makes readers think. |
by CJ Maleney
Massive typo if you look at it critically, |