by CRAFTY KEN Apr 2, 2017
category :
Nature, environment /
nature
More about Clouds |
by Meena Krish
This is something different, refreshing and vivid too! |
by CRAFTY KEN
Thanks Meena! |
by Dark Secrets
I love the imagery in this poem. It creates an effect of one of those "speed up nature" videos. I like the flow of events, how it's high spirited, brings you down and up again. |
by CRAFTY KEN
Zahra, don't be sorry, I acually like the new style that you taught me. In School English was my Class and you are a great Teacher! By the way, my first Cousin Evelyn was an English Teacher in Canada and she published a Book about English but I don't know the details, maybe a Goggle search under her maiden name Tierney? Ken |
by DarkLight
Wow! lovely interpretation of clouds nature. well put. That is quite a powerful poem. |
by CRAFTY KEN
Thank you Darklight, Ben and Em, the Song; Listen to the rhythm of the falling rain was an inspiration to me in writing this poem. Also those Monday Holidays laying in bed with the sound of the rain outside was a delight! Our daughter in California always misses those beautiful billowing Clouds of Florida. |
by Ben Pickard
Lovely, Ken. What an interesting and original write this is. As I read, I could almost imagine my own lips becoming parched and then, at the end, drenched in the wholesome goodness of heaven's springs! |
by Em
Very rhymatic and refreshing |