Comments : Just my Luck

  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    Alex, I'm so sorry but I had to laugh at this, why?? Because #storyofmylife lol!!! I love how you write, it's always so honest and relatable which is what I like in poetry sometimes the honest, raw writes make the best pieces don't they?

    1/ A very straight to the point stanza which tells me even before reading further that it's not going to be good....

    2/ This is always so sad and you can never quite get over the 'right' person either and when they come along at the wrong time you always ask yourself what if and why, don't you??

    3/ These kinds of people are horrible and should be left to their own devices but it's life and we have to live with it. I like the imagery of them coming along just to smash up the castles of our hearts and smashing them up because then when the right person comes along it's always the wrong time, usually when we've just been heartbroken, right?

    4/ Yes and the thing is it's things we have believed before and will no doubt believe again, isn't it? Or is that just me?

    5/ The killer one but we can't help falling for them again.

    Absolutely loved this, Em