Rapidly, I'm Falling

by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist   Apr 3, 2017


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I see things in different ways,
While watching you today.
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Insects can swim and turtles can fly,
I'm in love oh (sigh...)
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I need a float to keep me steady
Coz I'm loving this feeling already.
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I can see the milky way in your eyes,
For you, I'm falling thrice.
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Don't bring me down, I'm on space,
you are my biggest star in a perfect place.
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The lightning you command to struck me,
Carried a thousand volts of electricity.
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You are a stunning surprise,
Like the most beautiful sunrise.
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You are merciless for giving me this feeling,
It bounced off the lower ground up to the highest ceiling,
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It's thrilling,
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it's electrifying,
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I'm floating
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and
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rapidly
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V

I'm falling.

AUTHOR'S NOTE

( We poets are empath ..we can feel the feeling even if we are not in that situation)... this one I Wrote for inlove people..I am trying to break into lines how exactly they feel...hope you love this piece...

© 2017 (Gelyn G. Rodriguez). All Rights Reserved

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  • 7 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Wow again Gel! I love your forms. It's breathtaking! This one is as Em says it is...Shamazing!

  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    Shamazing! That is all Xx

    Glad to be back xx

  • 7 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    Gel this is freaking awesome, word choice etc is spot on throughout and your metaphors are excellently executed

    Awesome job!

    Ben

  • 7 years ago

    by sim 84

    Beautiful piece of art

  • 7 years ago

    by CRAFTY KEN

    Good job Gel, it took be back to that time of experiencing a first love. The range of emotions, flying high by just hearing her voice, hitting the floor when she made another choice.
    5/5
    Ken

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