Let Me Help You

by Jay Colon   Apr 5, 2017


I want to tell you

Stop carrying the world on your shoulders
Letting it weigh you down
Pushing you lower.

Choosing to struggle.
So you don't owe nobody
Saying you don't need anybody.

But let me help you.

I know you could do it on your own.
You don't have to.
You don't have to ask.
I'll give you whatever you desire.

Whatever I give to you
don't come with no condition
no consequences
you don't have to love all alone

Give me a try
Give me the opportunity

I'll prove that I am different
there's no secrets
no hidden agendas
I'm all open

you never know
I could be the one

to set you free
hold you when you need someone
smother you with love
or just a hug

I'll give you all you desire
all of you is all I require

just let me help you

Some burdens can erase
The load is lighter
I won't run away
I give you my word to stay

give me a try
give me the opportunity
let me help you

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Latest Comments

  • 7 years ago

    by tayang

    love how you wrote it..

  • 7 years ago

    by Ren

    Beautiful!

    "I want to tell you

    Stop carrying the world on your shoulders
    Letting it weigh you down
    Pushing you lower."

    ^^
    Love these lines! Especially the layout and how you put a space after those first words. It really helps emphasize the next few lines.

    Great job!