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  • 7 years ago

    by Shruti

    When the one whom we love so dearly leaves, nothing can truly describe the pain we feel.
    Sad yet lovely poem. I like the layout.
    Well written.
    ~S

  • 7 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    A sad piece that is full of raw emotion but, again, really well laid out and written. I like that you chose to centre this.

    All the very best,

    Ben

    • 7 years ago

      by 2luv

      Thank you both, one of my first works HERE and it's hard to
      come out from hiding.