by Lvi
Ren |
by Ren
Thank you so much, Lvi! |
by Ben Pickard
A sad write, Ren, but one that is very well written and rhymed throughout. |
by Ren
Thank you so much Ben! I really appreciate you taking the time to read and comment. Take care and I hope you are well :) |
by Brenda
Ren, a sad thoughtful write. A very personal piece that I really appreciate your honesty and openness. Its not easy when we ourselves are the harshest critics of one self. So many think this pill or that pill will be the miracle cure all to whatever ails us. Nobody takes into consideration that we are unique and just because it works for one it may not work for another. This life is not easy and for some the bumps in the road are more like a giant sink hole. Just being able to get through each day is a great accomplishnent so take solace in that. Hugs to you- |
by Ren
Aww thank you so very much, Brenda! You hit the nail on the head with your comment. We are our harshest critics...and the things we say to ourselves can have an even bigger impact on our self esteem than if someone else had said it. Trying to stay positive and find light in so much darkness is a challenge I see too many people struggling through. That's why one of my biggest passions in life is to help people find alternative and more holistic methods to treat ailments...especially the mental and emotional ones...because like you said, there is no magic pill that cures all, and everyone is different- and truthfully sometimes the medications don't work anyway. Thank you so much again for your wonderful comment and for the hugs! They are much needed and much appreciated! Much love to you, Brenda! Take care :) |
by CJ Maleney
This struck a chord with me in so many ways. |
by Ren
Wow thank you so much for taking the time to read and for your insightful comment, Craig! I really appreciate it. |
by CJ Maleney
"Now and then there's a light in the darkness, feel around till you find where your heart is" |
by Ren
I love Rob Thomas! I will look it up now. Thanks again! |
by ddavidd
What is hidden here is that your insecurities and withered state is already defeated by your rejuvenating words and the beauty of your mind. Beautiful job! |
by Ren
Aw thank you so much, Frank! I really appreciate your kind words!! Thank you very much for taking the time to read and comment :) |
by Michael
Hi Ren |
by Ren
Thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment, Michael! I truly appreciate it! :) it means a lot! |
by Pagan Paul
The pills just made my depression and anxiety worse, I stopped taking them. |
by Ren
Thank you so much for reading and commenting! I appreciate it! |
by Naughtymouse
Sometimes that guiding light I front of us dims and almost disappears but when we focus on it we can make it through... |
by Ren
Thank you so much Ben! :) |
by Scott Cole
I don't care what no one says this poem is awesome and it should have won. U too write so beautifully and tell the purest story while doing it....just amazing |
by Ren
Thank you so much Scott! I really appreciate your kind words and taking the time to read and comment on this :) |
by Scott Cole
I love this poem.....awesome well written |
by Lost One
The rhyme scheme is inspired. I have been experimenting myself. |
by Ren
Thank you so much, Tony!! |
by Jyoti Rawat
wawooooooo |
by Ren
Thank you!! |
by Em
Woah !! |
by Ren
Thanks for reading :) |
Added to favourites!! |
by Ren
Wow! Thank you sooo much!!! |
by mossgirl19
I did miss this one. I loved it dear Cowgirl... Awesome write. |
by Ren
Sweet lady! I'm so sorry I missed this comment. Thank you so much!! You know how much your words mean to me :) |
by Kelz45
Wow! An amazing write...looking forward to reading more! Thank you |
by Ren
Thank you so much!! I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment :) |
by WTF
So deep and how i feel, you write from the soul and it touches mine. |
by Ren
I'm glad we could connect :) thanks for reading and commenting! |