Comments : Fight Inside

  • 7 years ago

    by CJ Maleney

    A beautifully dark and enjoyable read

    Thank you

    Craig

    • 7 years ago

      by Once an Angel

      thank you for taking the time to read and comment!

  • 7 years ago

    by Larry Chamberlin

    "The unexamined life is not worth living."
    - Socrates in Plato's Apology
    Before any battle, even an internal one, can be fought (much less won) the sides must be identified, the forces mustered and the strengths and weaknesses of both opponents assessed accurately.
    You start by asserting that you are your own enemy, yet you progress into the stage of assessment, first expressing the need, then examining the means to aid your own survival. By the end, in my own humble opinion, you have gained the upper hand by accepting that you must and likely will enlist the aid of others.

    • 7 years ago

      by Once an Angel

      Thank you for your insights. I was not conscious of the progression you mentioned when writing this poem, and I think it's worth thinking about.

  • 7 years ago

    by Ren

    An intense write that expresses the never ending conflicts and battles we face within ourselves. Very powerful. Well done!

    • 7 years ago

      by Once an Angel

      Thank you for reading my work. It is always a poetic challenge for me to express my experiences as well as write broadly enough that my work might touch someone else, too. It sounds like this time I might have suceeded.

  • 7 years ago

    by Liz

    I love every bit of this.

    "I'm killing me
    with my consent,
    a coward's dark confession."

    My favorite verse. This is worded so beautifully.

  • 7 years ago

    by hiraeth

    It's always easier to run than it is to stay fight. You did a great job of encapsulating that in this poem!

    • 7 years ago

      by Once an Angel

      Thank you for your comment and taking the time to read my work.

  • 7 years ago

    by Pagan Paul

    Such a difficult dilemma, one I know too well.
    I finally chose to fight, and its slowly working :)
    Well written and nicely expressed sentiment.
    PPx

    • 7 years ago

      by Once an Angel

      thank you for reading my work. i wish you all the courage and strength in your fight.

  • 7 years ago

    by CRAFTY KEN

    Nice write, much passion and deep confessions of a troubled Soul.

  • 7 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    A strong confession of a troubled soul...yes...and I think one I can relate with. The pace of this poem is lovely and it adds to the darkness of the piece. Great write!