by CJ Maleney
A beautifully dark and enjoyable read |
thank you for taking the time to read and comment! |
"The unexamined life is not worth living." |
Thank you for your insights. I was not conscious of the progression you mentioned when writing this poem, and I think it's worth thinking about. |
by Ren
An intense write that expresses the never ending conflicts and battles we face within ourselves. Very powerful. Well done! |
Thank you for reading my work. It is always a poetic challenge for me to express my experiences as well as write broadly enough that my work might touch someone else, too. It sounds like this time I might have suceeded. |
by Liz
I love every bit of this. |
Thank you. |
by hiraeth
It's always easier to run than it is to stay fight. You did a great job of encapsulating that in this poem! |
Thank you for your comment and taking the time to read my work. |
by Pagan Paul
Such a difficult dilemma, one I know too well. |
thank you for reading my work. i wish you all the courage and strength in your fight. |
by CRAFTY KEN
Nice write, much passion and deep confessions of a troubled Soul. |
by mossgirl19
A strong confession of a troubled soul...yes...and I think one I can relate with. The pace of this poem is lovely and it adds to the darkness of the piece. Great write! |