by Ben Pickard
The description and resulting imagery is so good in this that I almost felt like I was there with you! |
by Shruti
Thank you so much. :) |
by 2luv
Rain hides the tears and matches how you feel, |
by Shruti
Yes, right on spot. Thank you. :) |
by Ren
Oh this is absolutely gorgeous, Shruti! Just...wow! Love it! Amazing job! :) |
by Shruti
Thank you very much. ^-^ |
by Brenda
Such lush visuals, I was totally wrapped up in this. So, so beautiful... |
by Shruti
Thank you. :) |
by Brenda
Congratulations on your win! This truly was a beautiful write- |
by Shruti
Thank you. ^_^ |
by Ben Pickard
well done on your win. |
by Shruti
Thank you, and congrats on your win too. :) |
by Ren
Congrats on the win, Shruti! This is such a beautiful piece! :) |
by Shruti
Thank you for the nomination. :) |
by DarkLight
Congrats on the win.. |
by Meena Krish
The rain has an effect on people and the moods and visuals |
Beautiful write! Thanks for sharing. |
by Shruti
Thank you everyone. :) |
by Sushmita Mitra Chetri
Wow! This is really nice. Congo!:) |
by Sushmita Mitra Chetri
Wow! This is beautiful. Congo!:) |
by Em
Awesome! |
by Shruti
Thank you both. :) |
by Sai
What I got from this poem was this magnificent feeling of hope that trickled into disappointment. The transition is something that's not easily achieved but you did so here with the use of vivid details and a peek of the speaker's thoughts here and there. |
by BlueJay
Judging Comment: |
by chandelier
A beautiful write:) |
by Shruti
Thank you very much. :) |
by gumshuda
Oh how beautiful this is Shruti. I'm glad it won, this deserved it. |
by Shruti
Thank you. ^_^ |
This is lovely!!! Grey streets, wet flip flops, black sky... Wonderful imagery! I can feel the sadness and disappoinment in this write, the sadness from rembering things about someone you hold dear and the disappoinment in waiting for the rain that didn't come. Am just not fond of "Rain over me... please." And the overuse of ellipsis, some worked, but I think the others can be much better without it. Nonetheless, this is an amazing write! Added to favorites and congratulations on the win! |
by Shruti
Thank you very much. I appreciate everything you have said. Now two years after writing this poem, I think I have many improvements to make hahah! |
by Robert Long
Honestly I have no words to how lovely this poem is. Such imagery brought tears to my ears as I connected to this poem...very good job Shruti |
by Shruti
Thank you very much Robert. :) |