Comments : creepy crawlies

  • 7 years ago

    by Brenda

    Phil, I am not sure if you are referring to creepy crawlies metaphorically or literally? Either way really interesting write. Well done-

  • 7 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Phil I loved the first two verses but not so much the last one. I think because the first two verses were quirky and fun and suitable for all ages and audiences but the last not so much which is a shame because I really like the quirky style

    • 7 years ago

      by Phil

      Thanks and Milly I think you're right about that

  • 7 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Phil, a funny poem which I've had some experience with myself! I'm sorry I missed this one.

    Take care and all the best as ever,

    Ben

    • 7 years ago

      by Phil

      Thanks good sir