by Liz
This made me sad at the end. Like... I felt I'm the one with my heart left broken, if that makes any sense lol |
I totally understand what you mean- I've been there with others people work as well and it's such an interesting thing. It's exciting to me that this could evoke that emotion. Thanks for commenting on it, definitely made my day. |
by Ren
Wow, this is a very deep and very well written piece! I love the format, as well! Beautiful write! |
Thank you! It feels so good to get such positive feedback on it. Thank you for taking the time to comment on it. ^^ |
by Ren
Congrats on the win! :) |
Thanks! (: |
by ether
your words were in a perfect array to make this poem feel like the smoke, fragile and fleeting. the line breaks, vocabulary and general structure are all outstanding. |
This comment made my heart so happy! Thank you for your kind words. ^^ |
by magicandall
lovely and very artsy. I like it! |
Thanks. (: |
by Britt
Beautiful! <3 |
Thanks, Britt. <3 |
by Meena Krish
It seems like you have described the very thing that is held |
I'm glad to hear that. Thank you, Meena. (: |
by Em
Absolutely astonishing!! |
by mossgirl19
I want to second Em on this one. Beautifully written! |
Thanks, you two! It feels really good to hear these things. <3 |
by BlueJay
Judging Comment: |
Bluejay, thank you for this comment. The first time I read it upon winning made me feel so wonderful as it still does several months later. I really appreciate you taking the time to break down how you feel about it. Thanks again. (: |