So sad and a little dark.
It reminds me of insomnia.
PPx

Lm, I gotta admit I'm not usually a fan of poetry with repetition, I don't know why, sometimes it feels over dramatic to me and it looses it's integrity (my opinion only) but I liked the repetition here, it didn't feel forced or contrived, great emotional and atmospheric write.

Ben

There's nothing worse than not being able to sleep. We need that sleep to be able to function in the world, to be able to shut off our brains. After so many days of not getting that we start running on a whole different level. You really did a wonderful job describing this and I really liked this conversation you had with him. Well done-