TeN tHiNgS i HaTe AbOuT yOu!

by kim   Jul 9, 2004


I hate the way you talk to me,
Even though i say i don't care.

I hate the way you look at me,
The way you always stare.

I hate it when you shout at me,
When i have done nothing wrong.

I hate the way you push me away,
When you don't want to get along.

I hate the way you touch me,
When your drunk out of your head.

I hate the way you say such things,
Like 'I wish that you were dead'.

I hate the way you hug other girls,
As if i am not there.

I hate the way you always say,
Just how much you care.

I hate it when you laugh at me,
When i start to cry.

I hate the way i love you so much,
That i could never say good-bye.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Tara

    Omg kim!! that was like one of the best poems i have read tonight!!! ahh omg i loved it !!! my favorite stanza is----

    I hate it when you laugh at me,
    When i start to cry.

    I hate the way i love you so much,
    That i could never say good-bye.

  • 20 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Yeah i love that movie tho..ten things i hate about you! Its awsome! Your poem was almost like hers the one she read in the movie..im not sure whos i like better..but nice job!

  • 20 years ago

    by kim

    hey!! thanks again for all your comments. i just want to say i no what you mean ruth there are alot of people doing these poems but if it helps express how i feel then i dont care everyone had different ways in which they write. anyway thanks xxxx

  • 20 years ago

    by Serena

    That was so good...I know everyone is telling you to forget about him and move on...but I know its not easy. As much as they say that, it won't change how you feel for him and I'm sorry about that. It took me alot of courage to break up w/ my ex and I still miss him...but good luck with everything. Great Job!

  • 20 years ago

    by kim

    hey thanks 4 ur comments xxxxx