by Lyical Madness May 2, 2017
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
The smile doesn't reach my eyes |
by Shruti
I really love the last line. Every line is wonderfully put. |
Thank you both, really appreciate the feedback x |
by Naughtymouse
I love the questioning in this one, you paint some vivid images with a great word choice and i'm really digging the format of this one. |
by Michael
Hi Lyrical M. |