Comments : Fake

  • 7 years ago

    by Michael

    Hi Lyrical M.

    Another powerful, with a drained sadness. Wearing masks resonated with me. Its an arduous search at times for our true us.

    keep looking and take care

    Michael x

  • 7 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    I love the questioning in this one, you paint some vivid images with a great word choice and i'm really digging the format of this one.

    Very atmospheric and deep emotional write - great job!

    Ben

  • 7 years ago

    by Lyical Madness

    Thank you both, really appreciate the feedback x

  • 6 years ago

    by Shruti

    I really love the last line. Every line is wonderfully put.
    The words, emotions, meanings, wonderfully penne!. :)