Oh my...this started out so beautifully like watching a movie
everything going smoothly and fine then...what happened..? Heart
got crushed. You are a good story teller and that too in a poetry so very
well penned. It flowed smoothly and the rhymes and rhythm was perfect!

Thank u so much, did u catch the twist it was the roses talking and telling the story....glad u liked it thanks again....

Wow!!! I didn't catch that it was told from the roses point of view at first, but when I read your comment and read it again I was completely amazed! How creative! And such a beautiful write, as well. You capture those emotions perfectly! Well done!!

Ohhh.....Wow!!!!
Beautiful poem.... Very creative....And it made me teary.....

Rose's point of view... mind blown