Gentle, sad, and heartwarming. Beautifully written.
-Tony

As gentle, sweet truly heart warming piece that touches the Heart mind and soul. Beautiful x

This is just beautiful. Makes me think of being pregnant, having my child and going through that growing up process we all deal with. Well done-

Beautiful!!

Congratulations on your well deserved win this week x

Congratulations are in order.

Lovely write. Congrats on your win!

I'm a little late to the celebration but congrats. Again beautiful imagery. Your command of tempo is impressive, I was tapping my foot as I read this.

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A beautiful rhyming poem full of hope and promise. At first read with the message so clear and clean and the flawless rhyme scheme I wanted more, but having re read it a number of times the four stanzas is the right fit, making it a concise and powerful read. Totally captivated thank you!