by Jamie
I really like the meaning behind this poem. It seems to be a self reflection of the past and present. Which i think most poets can relate to. I enjoyed the word usage here as well as it fits well with each line. I don't know if a lot of people would think the word embers would work where it does, but i do. Because you are explaining the fires that have burnt from you. I like the questions at the end too, because you leave the reader thinking about what you will do. A cliffhanger of sorts, because i believe only each person can know how to live their own life. Great write! |
This is a nice reflective piece that is true for most women at some point in their lives. I like to think that the spark never dies but that as we grow older we need to fan it sometimes - have a blaze then let it rest for a while. Milly x |
This coupled with 'Can We' builds that story even further, shining more light on that past, that history. |