Not bad content, but the grammar needs working on. Maybe have a look at some other poems on the site or read up on some other poetry to see the benefits of using line breaks and/or punctuation. Your message is very quirky and I have no problems with that, but the grammar really lets this piece down. For me, it helps to read the piece out loud after I've penned it... just to check if it flows properly and makes sense.

Keep on writing! I look forward to seeing some more.