This piece present a great modality . It is hard though for the reader to understand how powerful conceptually and poetically this piece ventures, if he/she is not, like me, familiar with the theme from the beginning. I hope in future you return and make the adjustment in this great work of yours.

I agree with ddavidd about readers understanding this
write and yes its very deep and there are some ingrained
thoughts and feelings which the writer has left within these
lines...take care