Comments : My Potty poetry

  • 7 years ago

    by Pagan Paul

    Nice fun write and fun to read Michael.
    Nicely done.
    PPx

    • 7 years ago

      by Michael

      Thanks mate...just one of those which stir, and have to get it down on paper haha! :)

  • 7 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Nice!!!!!! I love your wording
    And the style!

    • 7 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Andrea, just had to do this write :)

  • 7 years ago

    by Brenda

    Michael, what a creative write! Nicely rhymed and entertaining. Well done -

    • 7 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Brenda, one of those oddball writes. That come at times :)

  • 7 years ago

    by Phil

    Just wonderful

    • 7 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Phil for lovely comments on both poems :)

  • 7 years ago

    by DarkLight

    Creative with words for a potty poetry

    • 7 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Darklight for your lovely words :)

  • 7 years ago

    by ddavidd

    Very witty and crafty, in sound and meaning. It is hard to do one , ten times harder to combine the two.
    I love how you used the affect of sound , P in the beginning and fear, sneer , jeer, tear, earthen... later the letter o and... all over this wonderful piece.