by DarkLight May 18, 2017
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
They speak of me like I'm nothing, |
by ddavidd
This is a heartfelt, well crafted piece. Reading through it though you would never get any clue the tormentor isn't man and actually is the time. It leaves you with the feeling that the poet decided to add a final twist in the end to make it mind boggling and even more interesting. |
by DarkLight
Thank you Frank |
by Liz
Thought-provoking piece. I've never actually thought of time so...profoundly before. Thank you for sharing this! |
by DarkLight
You're welcome Poetess |
by Ben Pickard
Good stuff, Shanky. Well written and well rhymed throughout with some interesting thoughts. I suppose time, ultimately, is the bane of all our lives whether we want it to speed up or slow down. |
by Pagan Paul
Excellent poem Darklight. Nicely penned. |
by DarkLight
Paul, I do appreciate your view. |
by Phil
Very interesting |