A wonderfully written and very poignant piece considering these rather depressing times we live in.

All the best, Michael.

Ben

A wonderful piece full of sad truths

This is a fantastic piece of work and it rings very true and is so poignant at this time.

Regards

Craig

Very powerful and I absolutely love the wording of this. So very true. Well done-

Extremely powerful and very well written, as always, Michael! Amazing write!

I agree with Rem. This is truly so powerful. I totally love the last verse. I can feel your poetry growing. Well done! Loved this.

Very nice Michael. This piece smells like fresh wound.

It is a masterpiece Michael, in it you nicely packed just about all of the World's cares. It's a call to the Creator of us all to right the many wrongs we see and to secure our friends and families. It deserves a "Win" for sure! Added it to my Favorites.

Ken,
Such lovely lovely words and it is that exactly fella.
A beautiful world, but such a brutal sadness for all humanity of the inhumane sickness

Peace and love to you and all :)

This is a great piece, reflecting your concern for the family in awareness of what's going on with the world. Creatively done too. Congrats on the win, Michael!

Congrats Michael!! :D it made me so happy to see this on the front page today!

Omg

Michael, no one in this world is happy with the things going on.
Do you think Bill gates or Mark juckerberg are happy?
No, because they want the things happen in this world according to them which they can't do, they know this.

Of course they are rich, they can control economies, but not natural calamities or the other actions of God which you mentioned in the end.

Even, I find myself upset with papa(God) about certain things which happens around me. But he never answer to anyone.
I know his ways of doing things hurt us, but sometimes it brings us closer too.

And he has left an option for us to understand why he does this or that; it's called enlightment. But it's a very tough path to choose.

enlight yourself and become one with the creator to see what he is seeing and why he is doing.

And I am sorry, if I have offended you with my comment.

Love and light!

This resonates with me. Thank you for the amazing read.