Great job, Trincy! Again you beat me... Rondeau is on my list of forms to try...and I'm still stuck on my sestina! :o) I will get them some day!

That poem was beautiful, the words had so much meaning and feeling. I loved it, it was different, but still very nice...LiL One

Thanks everybody.. for all the comments...For me it is worth hunderds of votes. But i really felt bad when that onner hit this same poem, twice. the rating fell from 5.0/6 to 4.0/8.... :(

Excellent poem, keep up the good work! julie -xx-

It's really cool that you write in all these different forms of poetry (or would it be called styles???) oh well...the point is they are all good and I am learning from them!! Keep it up girl!!

again.....all i can say is brilliant....

I really liked this poem. It is very different to the normal anniversary poems. You managed to describe a moment in so much detail. I'm a big fan of the Rondeau, although i have never (before now) read a Rondeau Redouble. I really don't understand why this has a low rating. It may be that the advanced wording you used may have thrown people off. But i liked it.
In the last stanza you say "Nothing did stop them make love" and i'm not sure this makes sense. I was thinking maybe you meant "Nothing did stop them making love".
Great work. Keep writing.