by mossgirl19 May 26, 2017
category :
Life, society /
about society
Pardon, for the loss of freedom |
by ddavidd
Yes it is exactly as you called it. |
by Ren
What an interesting write and very well written!! Well done on a powerful piece! |
by Brenda
I really liked this a lot. A lot of (pardon the pun) food for thought. We as a whole overconsume, waste and wantonly abuse this beautiful world we've been given. Your write hit home, well done- |
by hiraeth
I like this piece, it brings up a lot of truth about the selfish hedonistic society we live in. The ending was really powerful. Well done! |
by Ben Pickard
There is a lot of hard truth in this poem. |
by mossgirl19
Thanks a lot for checking this out and leaving a comment Ben! Blessings! |