There is a lot of hard truth in this poem.

Well written and all the best,

Ben

I like this piece, it brings up a lot of truth about the selfish hedonistic society we live in. The ending was really powerful. Well done!

I really liked this a lot. A lot of (pardon the pun) food for thought. We as a whole overconsume, waste and wantonly abuse this beautiful world we've been given. Your write hit home, well done-

What an interesting write and very well written!! Well done on a powerful piece!

Yes it is exactly as you called it.