Love and Life Confusion

by beyouplur   Jun 1, 2017


what do i feel I'm longing?
What is it that i think i need?
is it to be loved and wanted?
Or is it to fly free.........
to soar above the trees,
Making friends with the Pretty birds,
and broken bees

or is it to hold you close?
to die in your arms.
Sounds pretty shitty to me.....

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  • 7 years ago

    by Ben

    Very nice open write here, I like the questioning in it - makes us all think what we want and need.

    the first i've read from you, really great job.

    Ben

  • 7 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Ha! Yay, the last line suggests that you are indeed confused. A beautiful write, simply engaging piece.

    • 7 years ago

      by beyouplur

      Thank you very much for all your nice comments!!

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