by Mortal Utopia Jun 3, 2017
category :
Friendship, family /
other
Like over-aged children, |
by mossgirl19
Loved the picture you painted here. Beautiful in its own simple way. The second line though kinda distracts the flow for me, 'we opened pot after pot of paint'. Maybe 'we opened paint pot after pot' will do, but of course this will be more direct, and I know you have a reason for the word order. |