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  • 7 years ago

    by Jamie

    Short, but it really does send a message. I really liked it, because it is personal but a lot of people can relate to this. You leave the reader kind of thinking, what has happened to make the author write this. I like poems like that, because it leaves the reader to draw their own conclusion. Well done.

    Edit. I also enjoyed the title as well. I know a lot of people might just think of it as something like "unknown" but i feel it could hold a deeper meaning as well. Like it goes with the poem itself. Almost like you are questioning other people. Its a fine line that blurs sanity and insanity. I love it!

    • 7 years ago

      by beyouplur

      Nailed it.. thank you so much <3

  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    Holy sh it can you see me on the edge with you... I'll hold your hand !!

    • 7 years ago

      by beyouplur

      Yes i see you boo boo, hang on tight...

  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    Double post