While You Sleep (Senryu)

Well written and insightful

Im amazed at your ability to convey such beautiful and deep emotions within 3 lines... and that you're able to do it multiple times... I've been reading your senryu(s?) And they're top-notch! Great job

Love the sentiment in this

Watching someone sleep is really wonderful and calming-
The way they breathe and all the minute details about them and of course the eyes.
And the ending... 'I am here', that's the only thing we need to hear sometimes.

Amazing and well written.
I really liked the piece. :)

Very good mossgirl :)

Michael