The Cranes (Tanka)

by mossgirl19   Jun 7, 2017


The cranes bright in white
Are here when the fields are full
Now barren, the crops
Have gone, but the cranes managed
To remain in white, alive.

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  • 7 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Again, syllables all right and correct. I believe the tanka usually deals with matters of the heart where this veers more toward nature, but I think that's okay too. Anyway, nicely done again.

    All the best,

    Ben

  • 7 years ago

    by Michael

    Very thought provoking piece of writing mossgirl
    Enjoyed this

    Michael :)

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