Comments : June 7th

  • 7 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    So sorry for your loss, this is a sad, beautiful poem.

  • 7 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Heartbreaking.....

  • 7 years ago

    by Michael

    Beautiful, but so sad

    Warm wishes :)

    Michael x

  • 7 years ago

    by CJ Maleney

    I really understand this, I feel the same may bank holiday

    Regards

    Craig x

  • 7 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Heart wrenching write, Liz.

    All the best,

    Ben

  • 7 years ago

    by Brenda

    I'm sorry for your loss. It is so difficult for us left standing of what was that tipping point. Well done on this.

  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    This is so very sad. I'm so sorry

  • 7 years ago

    by Ren

    I'm covered in chills. What a sad but beautifully written piece! I'm so sorry for your loss.

  • 7 years ago

    by Hellon

    I like the fact that you 'touched' on the subject rather than have it 'in the face'. It's a subject that can be upsetting, both to people with a mental illness, and for families dealing with it. This was very tastefully presented while still getting the sadness of loosing a person across. Nicely done.

  • 6 years ago

    by Nema

    This is deeply sad. There is something about the last two stanzas that just gets to my soul in one reading.

  • 6 years ago

    by Nema

    This is deeply sad. There is something about the last two stanzas that just gets to my soul in one reading.

  • 6 years ago

    by Bleu

    This poem definitely has a way of ripping your heart apart. The third Stanza hit me like a ton of bricks. This is absolutely beautiful.

  • 6 years ago

    by Phoenix ¥

    Beautiful poem x