by mossgirl19
So sorry for your loss, this is a sad, beautiful poem. |
by Maple Tree
Heartbreaking..... |
by Michael
Beautiful, but so sad |
by CJ Maleney
I really understand this, I feel the same may bank holiday |
by Ben Pickard
Heart wrenching write, Liz. |
by Brenda
I'm sorry for your loss. It is so difficult for us left standing of what was that tipping point. Well done on this. |
by Em
This is so very sad. I'm so sorry |
by Ren
I'm covered in chills. What a sad but beautifully written piece! I'm so sorry for your loss. |
by Hellon
I like the fact that you 'touched' on the subject rather than have it 'in the face'. It's a subject that can be upsetting, both to people with a mental illness, and for families dealing with it. This was very tastefully presented while still getting the sadness of loosing a person across. Nicely done. |
by Nema
This is deeply sad. There is something about the last two stanzas that just gets to my soul in one reading. |
by Nema
This is deeply sad. There is something about the last two stanzas that just gets to my soul in one reading. |
by Bleu
This poem definitely has a way of ripping your heart apart. The third Stanza hit me like a ton of bricks. This is absolutely beautiful. |
by Phoenix ¥
Beautiful poem x |