This is a great piece, full of so much emotion!

"Afraid of being just another notch in the bed post." ---this line is so profound!

Well done!

Oh. Tugged at my heartstrings a few times. Emotions rising and falling, hmmm, this is excellent!

Mpm firstly its good to see another write by you especially one done so fantastically.

1/ I must say I think we are all afraid of love especially if we have previously been hurt and to be a one nightstand, that's hard.

2/ wow, that's harsh and again one thing mainly us women are afraid of becoming but hey such? is life.

3/ Oh wow. Love this because it shows this person truly means alot to you and you feel like a nothing compared to them and though you love them you just can't figure them out.

4/ That endings on point and I totally hear you.

Em

"I want enough of you for all time"
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Love this line. :0) x