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  • 7 years ago

    by Phil

    This is good, this is very good.

  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    Double post!

  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    Mel Liz, firstly well done on a wonderful yet sombre piece (in my opinion) with what I believe to be some fab subtle rhyming throughout.

    The title I must say intrigued me as it made me wonder exactly what is 'normal' because I don't think any of us know as we (like with anything) will all have our own views on it.

    1/ We all change faces and it's abit like putting on a posh voice when talking to say the hospital or the queen (haha) and again I wonder why? And I think it's because deep down we're all afraid of judgement and our first impression we make on people.

    2/ had to laugh at this as earlier I was ok then bam I turned into crazy cat lady (stupid pms lol)

    3/ This is more relatable for sweet ladies like us ;) keep your friends close but your enemies closer.

    4/ This was like the wind hitting my face, bam!! But please don't frown or your face'll stick that's what I'm told anyhow!!

    5/ This gets us all.. sometimes we have to love and hate and forgive but sometimes it's hard.

    6/ This is very true. I have lost all my faith recently

    7/ Ditto!!!

    Loved the honesty in this.

    Much love,
    Duchess Em ;) x

    • 7 years ago

      by mossgirl19

      Duchess,

      Wow! You explained everything more clearly than I could have. Fan bloody tastic comment! Returning the love, Lady Mel Liz. :-)

    • 7 years ago

      by Em

      It's my pleasure :)

  • 7 years ago

    by Ren

    An excellent write dear Lady! Amazing work!

    "I admit, I change faces
    And I do it all the time."

    ^^
    This line hit me like a ton of bricks and took my breath away. Sad but true and I can absolutely relate.

    • 7 years ago

      by mossgirl19

      Dear Cowgirl,

      Thank you so very much and glad you liked it! :-)