Comments : Missing you Pt 2

  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    Brenda what a truly wonderful yet sad piece of writing which I guess is rather relatable.

    1/ This makes you wonder if this person you're missing so is a lost love or someone who has unfortunately passed over as I can feel the emotion and yearning right from the start.

    2/ The emotion continues and now it's quite clear this is about someone who has sadly passed over and the yearning is definitely clear here and though it's saddening i like the subtle rhyming.

    3/ If only it was allowed. This is hard hitting !!

    4/ The emotion and heartache again is clear especially with "distraught" "destroyed" and "alone" and though this is sad the imagery is breathtaking?!!

    Much love,
    Em

    • 7 years ago

      by Brenda

      Awww, thank you Em! I think it would be awful to finally get there and be turned away. We always want just one more day. Hugs-

  • 7 years ago

    by Sai

    This year I experienced my first major loss and this put into words what I could not. Thank you for sharing this.

    • 7 years ago

      by Brenda

      First off I am sorry for your loss. 2nd, I am comforted this helped in some small way. Thank you -

  • 7 years ago

    by Sampreeth kotian

    Beautifully penned...

    • 7 years ago

      by Brenda

      Thank you so much, I appreciate your thoughts-