Holy smokes....

Don't bury me in sadness! Beautiful poem and heart-wrenching one! Great piece!

Very good. Your style reminds me of another poet on this site, but I can't quite place it at the minute.

Anyway, as above, this is a very good piece of writing indeed.

All the best,

Ben

Wow!! This is excellent! And so well written! Fantastic job!

Another fascinating write. I really like your style. A lot of food for thought with this. You seem to have many layers of story within-well done-

"I have strange dreams
where I pluck the world from the blackness
of the universe, and fold it neatly in half."

Loving that imagery so much! Fantastic write:)

Well penned!
Great piece....

Brilliant write. I love the emotions that radiate with each line. It feels like a long, deep journey of growth from the beginning to end, all summed up within a poem. Your style is wonderful. Also, the ending- it's so strong definite, I love it.

I'm definitely excited to read more of your work!