by mossgirl19 Jun 12, 2017
category :
Life, society /
faith, religion
Once upon a time there was a king |
by CRAFTY KEN
Proud of you Mossgirl as you took a true Bible Story and were able to define and condense it using poetic rhyme. In Psalm 119 David reveals the punishment and forgiveness by his loving God. Added to my Favorites! |
by mossgirl19
Thank you, Ken. It is indeed a great story. To God be the glory for this work. |
by Brenda
A lot to be taken from this parable. You really did a fine job with this write- |
by Sai
I enjoyed reading this. Longer poems usually fail to maintain my attention but your storytelling and rhyming here did. |
by mossgirl19
That is one thing I hope to accomplish so thank you for affirming. I appreciate it. |
by Marvellous
"...Your sin will not define you, God's forgiveness will." |
by mossgirl19
Seemed like a history class right? Hehe. Thanks for leaving a comment. |