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I like these short inspiring pieces but I have a challenge for you to try and make them go a little further, let me elaborate with this piece....

money is the taste everyone feels (good start) but why ??

Love is the sick which doesn't heels
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Again another good part which rhymes but heels should be heals here again why doesn't it heal us?? And why do you describe love as sick??

time is second goes away
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Now this confused me a little as you were talking about love then went to time it would be better in my opinion if you told us why the seconds pass by is it because of love or the yearning for love??

Please don't take this personally I just have faith that you can go alot further with your work that's all.

Best wishes
Em