Knocking On Deaths Door

This is such an excellent write and so well written! Well done!

An emotional visual piece that sucks the reader in. I felt like it was me knocking on the door

Hey this is so sad but well done that I could feel the emotion, I was this person in the piece and it helps that I can relate so much to this piece that it's like a kick in the teeth.

1) This is a really fab opening and gripped me because I have felt like this and still soon lying around, moping and though breathing I wonder why because inside I feel empty, numb even.

2) I totally get this but we cannot let the past or the people of the last define us. I have found myself saying this all to often recently but it's so bloody true and our only regrets should be what we didn't do not what we did do imo.

3) This got me right in the heart and snapped the strings a little.. wow.

4) This is really powerful and tbh all we all have is time and none of us know when our time is up.

The tap tap tap is still playing on my mind as is very significant in that you'd go today if you could because of the hand you've been dealt but staying is what will make you stronger.

All the best,
Em

Although it's a call to death, I find this very creatively presented. The tapping of the foot signifies patience while waiting, which to me somehow means that the person is really not in the rush to die. To tell death to take its time somehow gives me a feeling that the writer still has a little will to live. It's how I see it :-). This was creatively done.