Hi, Gopi. What a sad thing to know. Is it just recently? Sending love and comfort to you. For me, this poem is full of your adoration for your dad. I think that you are really doing well with writing longer pieces. Just be aware of some words that are misspelled such as hights instead of heights, pleeded instead of pleaded. Also, the word taught in the third stanza may be 'thought' if I am to read the line. You are doing excellently and I am very happy to read your poems! Hope you are well.

Hi gopi

Such a brave and heart-breaking write

Well done and thank you for sharing your sadness

Michael :)