by mossgirl19
Beautiful write, what an amazing point you have in here. Great rhyming and what an inspirational read! |
by k.won
great message scrittore. I'd rather be a broken shell too. |
How true. Loved this piece. I too would rather be the broken shell x |
by Ren
"(I'd rather be a broken shell |
by Em
Love love love.. |
These broken shells were stunning |
by gopi nath
Awsome lines keep writing |
by Em
Congratulations on your win :) |
by mossgirl19
Congrats on your win! :-) |
by Brenda
Such true words spoken, this is really beautiful. Congratulations on your front page write and win. |
by Ren
Congrats on the win!! :D |
Delightful poem with a wonderful message. Your work is strengthened by keeping the analogy consistent throughout the poem. Well deserved win. |
by Scrittore
Wow!! I never expected to win a poetry contest. Thank you for all the kind comments! <3 |
by Maher
This is a well thought out and well written poem. The analogy you've used is nothing short of beautiful, meaningful, easy to grasp and packed with a great moral. Don't be surprised that you won this contest, because it's no wonder that you did. Congrats ma'am :) |
by DarkLight
A constructed message that really deserved this win. Congratulations. |
by Thomas
Judging comment: |
I enjoyed this one |