Comments : Storms

  • 7 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Loneliness its like a perfume
    the smell always stays

    ^^

    A claustrophobic sort of poem and these two lines are genuinely excellent.

    All the very best,

    Ben

    • 7 years ago

      by Eve

      The words you used to describe my poem are beautiful..thank you

  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    Sometimes it's hard work feeling lonely especially if we are in a room full of people, depression does that to us
    Second to last last 'writting' should be writing

    Em

    • 7 years ago

      by Eve

      I know it should be writing but I can't change it :(
      Thank you!