Comments : The River

  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    Andrea, as always with your work this resonates with me and we seem to be in sync sometimes with our emotions which is unfortunate.

    The title i would say drew me in because I like walking along the river here some times but in all honesty I saw you'd posted something new and had to read it.

    1) The imagery here is beautiful and tbh I don't think any of us could find real peace because we could never find that place and even if we did I doubt any of us would be able to fully appreciate that place thus making us stronger and at peace no matter how hard we tried.

    2) I like this like a statement of "now I've bared my all I can rest easily" but in my opinion it gets thoughts swirling and twirling into a dark abyss and then we can't seem to get out for some time. I guess writing about it helps a little but not completely.

    3/ Beautiful imagery.

    4/ This is a real kick in the gut and a though no doubt many like me and you have thoughts of often. I do feel I am missing the real meaning of this piece though.

    Much love
    Em

  • 7 years ago

    by Michael

    Andrea,
    Chills of such a
    wonderfully written piece full of imagery
    love it

    Michael :)

  • 7 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    I have no words...I love the whole scenery.

  • 7 years ago

    by Brenda

    Andrea, I just love this, your visuals are amazing!

  • 7 years ago

    by Ren

    This is just freaking gorgeous, Andrea!! Amazing write!

  • 7 years ago

    by CJ Maleney

    This just got a little noise from me not often heard.

    Craig x