Excellent piece! Well written and rhymed!

Great rhyming and how very sweet! To hear such words, every woman's wall might be broken down. :-) Agree with dear Ren, this is excellent!

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Great write and inspirational to boot.
People suffer and build up walls they don't think will ever be broken down but it's often the love of the right person who can do just that.

All the very best,

Ben