Comments : Tick-Tick

  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    This is extremely powerful. Time stands still for no one unfortunately.
    In line 2 you wrote 'of the' twice which I think is a typo

    Em

    • 7 years ago

      by Rhinehalt

      Oops. Thank you for noticing that. I wrote this right before going to bed last night. So, I was really tired. I had to correct two mistake before going to bed. I miss that one, thank you again.

  • 7 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Yes, powerful indeed.