Comments : The deepest cuts

  • 7 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Dear M...what a heart-wrecking piece. No words as I am breathless again of so much sadness. :-(

    The poem is without doubt beautiful.

    Why is everyone so sad any way...:-(

    Much love to you.

    • 7 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Miss M :)
      So much truth is expressed through writing... the good, the bad and the ugly.
      ... but I'm happy :)

  • 7 years ago

    by Ren

    A heart breaking piece that is so beautifully written, with deep and raw emotions throughout. Well done, Dear Michael, and much love to you always!!

    • 7 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Miss Ren
      Yours words mean a lot.
      ..at times these pieces just come raw :)

  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    Michael this is so brutally honest and raw that my eyes sting. No one should ever go through this but unfortunately we do.

    Much love

    • 7 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Em,

      And yes some of us do. Truth known, made me strive to be a healthier parent to my two, as best I can :)

    • 7 years ago

      by Em

      I'm glad it made you a better dad as sometimes it has adverse effects.
      Much love
      X

  • 7 years ago

    by Michael

    It can Em yes it certainly can :)

  • 7 years ago

    by Brenda

    Michael, it is heartbreaking to think any child has gone through what you did. My heart goes out to you. Thank you though for this open honest write. It really shows how strong a person's spirit really is. Hugs-

    • 7 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Brenda for such lovely words of comfort. Long time passed...lots learned for the good. I feel we all share personal pasts and present circumstances, and being a writer, it's hard to hold back :)