Maher, I'm not sure if you've changed/added anything to this and I'm too lazy to look but it seems alot more well let's say thrilling and chilling than what i remember but still beautifully done and not certainly welcome rhymed. I still stand by comment I sent you and no matter how many times I read this I still can't seem to figure out the underlining story or whatever but it's told really and gave me goosebumps and moved me (no I don't mean off my arse lol) and none many people can move me because I'm made of tough stuff haha.
I have a huge smile on my face that you decided to post it and though I know you're not much for the nominations etc I truly wish this is as it deserves a front page viewing so I'm gutted I can't nominate and once again thanks for trusting me to be honest when you sent it to me.

Fantastical as always.
Em x

Maher, this is amazing! This story was unfolding and part of me was saying look away but I couldn't. Totally engrossing write. Love this!

Loved this. An amazing piece with great rhythm and rhymes. Superb imagery. Definitely worthy of nomination

AWW SC - You posted it! Its changed a little, but still.. Im so glad!
I am glad its been nominated! Its worthy of it!!

I still loved reading it - even thought i did get a sneak peak.

Well done! and PS. I told you so (you know to what!).... :P

Loved reading this!