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  • 9 years ago

    by Em

    I like the simplicity (if that's the correct term here) of this because it's well done and not so in your face so to speak.

    1/ So you have been watching this lady from afar and she seems to want the same things as you do which is always good and even though she doesn't see her own worth you do but in all honesty who sees their own worth?

    2/ This is just wonderfully beautiful and the rhymes on point.

    3/ Aww. So sad but fantastic.

    Em

  • 9 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Sweet. :-)

    • 9 years ago

      by Ren

      Agreed! Wonderful write! Well done!

  • 5 hours ago

    by Sandra Mansur

    Hi! I really enjoyed reading your poetry. Your words create such strong emotions, but I felt they could become even more powerful with visuals.

    I’m a freelance artist with 3 years of experience, and I can turn the feelings and imagery in your poems into illustrations so readers can actually see the words come to life. We could even start with one poem or a few stanzas as a small project.

    I’d also love to share a few ideas on how visuals could help you reach a wider audience and create another way to benefit from your poetry.

    If you’re interested, feel free to reach me here:

    llunarlibrary@gmail.com
    Instagram: @lunaartsoul

    Warm Regards,
    LunarLibrary